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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2003-06-22 05:54 AM



Write With Me

Won’t you come
and write with me
Open this heart
and help me to see
Brother! Sister!
Hear my cry
Help me to reach
my tear blue sky
Trapped now in thought
fuelled by desire
I’ve lost my way
from loves great fire
Into the dark
this passion quelled
Now encased within
love’s frozen shell
Hold high the torch
To set me free
Oh won’t you come
and write with me!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

© Copyright 2003 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved
JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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Washington
1 posted 2003-06-22 06:57 AM


Well written! Clearly understood!

Wonderful write!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-06-22 11:32 PM



The torch is only the beginning...
Love is a mighty flame to keep burning.

I understood this and I enjoyed.



Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-06-23 12:31 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, dearest friend, we all hear you and I hope that fiery muse has come through into you and set a spark to your heart! (big hugggsssssss) Write on, sweet friend, onward we go now, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2003-06-23 12:34 PM


Release the passion from your pen
Open up your heart once more
Seek the magic of love again
And ride it to a living shore

**hugs** my friend....

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-06-23 08:38 AM


wonderful!
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-06-23 08:41 AM


Hi Eddie!
So good to read your words here once more.
Excellent write my friend.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
7 posted 2003-06-23 09:12 AM


Beautiful...I'd write with you anytime, you know that. You are and always will be special
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
8 posted 2003-06-27 10:26 AM


Doesn't sound like you require anyone to write with you my dear friend...your poetic voice soars to the stars on it's own~
A beautiful, soulful write, so glad I had a chance to share it~

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2003-06-27 12:59 PM


Wonderful poem here.
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

10 posted 2003-06-27 01:47 PM


simply stunning, very much enjoyed
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...
11 posted 2003-07-01 09:01 AM


My belated thank you my friends for stopping by to add your thoughts, much appreciated. Take care!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
12 posted 2003-07-20 10:02 AM


I would love to write with you!  Seems we never connect anymore   

Hope all is well with your soul my friend...

hugs, g

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