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eminor_angel
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0 posted 2003-06-21 10:58 PM


Brewing

The embers smolder
The flames encroach
Omen of the consuming

Like drinking ash
Like drinking Black
Brewed from that which is dead

Smolder, embers!
Encroach, flames!
The consuming of omens

Ash likes drinking
Black likes drinking
That which is brewed from dead


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-21 11:12 PM


Smolder, embers!
Encroach, flames!
The consuming of omens

interesting write,, and lines..

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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2 posted 2003-06-21 11:25 PM


Interesting, indeed. Enjoyed.
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-06-21 11:29 PM


This is wonderful, and when read with a snarl, it's downright chilling.

Impressive chanting, e-angel.

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4 posted 2003-06-22 04:59 AM


great format!
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5 posted 2003-06-22 10:26 AM


I'm not tasting that brew!
as I lift my cup in salute...

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6 posted 2008-08-05 11:10 PM


Interesting Write



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