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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2003-06-12 09:42 AM

Soft as dreaming cat
Faces upturned to the mist
Soft as lovers touch

Dream on mornings breath
Touched by the dawns coming light
Kissed by lovers lips

Awake to your hands
To the sun breaking through fog
Morning love and you.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-06-12 09:44 AM

sounds like a nice way to awaken... hope the rest of your day is as gentle.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-06-12 11:08 AM

Enjoyed the gentle awakenings of your lovely "senryuic" poem!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-06-12 01:37 PM

You have sparked envy in me.

Both for the content, and the quiet grace of your write.

serenity sighs.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-06-12 03:09 PM

Need some morning, afternoon and evening love...James

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

5 posted 2003-06-12 03:38 PM

Sweet. Very nice Paula. =)
Joe

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-06-12 05:06 PM

Paula - couldn't think of much more to make it a great morning...

BC

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

7 posted 2003-06-13 12:59 PM

Now that i have this nice awaking, do i have to get out of the bed.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-06-13 01:53 PM

ah...

sigh

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

9 posted 2003-06-13 02:07 PM

Paula....as Ron suggested....very gentle. Bob

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

10 posted 2003-06-14 06:40 AM

Sweet, simple and nice. Thanks for the words.

Goldenrose.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

11 posted 2003-06-15 01:57 AM

Nice! Good to see you write again my friend, take care!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2003-07-15 04:02 AM

Oh...I'm jealous...
This is beautiful, Paula.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

13 posted 2003-07-15 05:37 AM

I must confess that I have read your work many many times, and I always find a touch of grace and much beauty in your thoughts that you share here. This is no exception, and a definite winner in my book! ~~V~~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

14 posted 2003-07-15 09:05 AM

Thanks to you all for your sweet words...it means a lot since I don't get here as often as I used to.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

15 posted 2003-07-15 06:00 PM

BEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOTEEEFULL!!! lol, saving this!!!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2003-07-15 06:05 PM

enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2003-07-15 06:29 PM

Here's to morning love...James

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