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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-21 01:44 PM


We're too
young and stupid to realize..
what's more important and
loss..
isn't something I thought
much about untill..
Well,
I see a sunny day
and I..
I don't really go outside at all.

I'm falling..living
too fast..
Wondering
which day this week
will I feel like I'm dying..
and there's not much else
I can do ..but
stay here,
with you.

I see a line of silk,
keeping half of the things I
worked so hard to
aquire and I...
stuck myself in a bottle,
waiting to be released.
I hear footsteps back and forth
across my mind and ..
well,
I hold on..'cause I'm falling..
too fast to comprehend,
that
you were my only
friend.


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-21 01:59 PM


you have written my past here...and sometimes my present
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-08-01 01:33 PM



Enjoying your writing, m'dear...

cusick
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3 posted 2003-08-01 01:43 PM


This is so sad. Greiving takes it's course and the sun will shine in time. Hugs Maggie
Kahlil
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4 posted 2003-08-01 02:30 PM


I see a line of silk,
keeping half of the things I
worked so hard to
aquire and I...
stuck myself in a bottle,
waiting to be released.
I hear footsteps back and forth
across my mind and ..
well,
I hold on..'cause I'm falling..
too fast to comprehend

These words helped me a lot today, thanks.
~K~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-08-01 02:49 PM


Sending you a healing potion that I blended myself, Dear Genie In A Bottle!


EA

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-08-01 03:31 PM


We're too
young and stupid to realize..
what's more important and
loss..
isn't something I thought
much about untill..
Well,
I see a sunny day
and I..
I don't really go outside at all.

There's quite a few lines of yours I'd wish I'd written but none more than these. I know this too well..the ssssun..it burnsssss..um ..yeah

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
7 posted 2003-08-01 04:02 PM


"and there's not much else
I can do ..but
stay here,
with you."

Oh yeah, been there, done that...

Amazing...

Susan C.

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