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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2003-06-20 01:17 AM



A perfect hug...never known
before the hug from you. Wrapped
up, cuddled tight. Our bodies
joined as one. We breathe...in
syncronized rhythms. Your arms
holding me close, mine flung across
your chest. I listen to the beat
of your heart. Each beat repeating
love. I find myself in a cocoon
of warm surrender, warm satisfaction.
Dreams only pique my desire, illumine
the deepest part of my memory. Starshine
rains down upon our bodies...dusting us
with the hope of another perfect hug.


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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2003-06-20 01:19 AM


This was a perfect poem! anything to do with love I love it! and I know these words all to well! Lovely piece!
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-06-20 01:31 AM


Very Beautiful.......


our love is ours to give, and to keep sacred between us, stitched by fire,

with a thread that will hold for eternity, to savor and enrich and to nurture into more blooms for our table.

So I come to you tonight, and bring you this as you arise.

My heart engulfed in wonder, beating closer to yours this night,

enrapt by your beauty, tantalized, mesmerized,
you surround me, and we taste a hint of the ecstasy of light.


SEA
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with you
3 posted 2003-06-20 01:34 AM


good grief woman...
this rocks! How completely exquisite

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-06-20 05:45 AM


Lovely...I could use a few of these...James
Goldenrose
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5 posted 2003-06-20 07:37 AM


Ah......love...sweet words you say, love conquers everything.

Thank you for the words.

Goldenrose.


Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-06-20 09:51 AM


That, my dear, IS the "Perfect Hug"!!!

Hug on! Hug long!--and hug often!
EA

vandana
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7 posted 2003-06-20 09:51 AM


ENJOY YOUR READ
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2003-06-20 09:53 AM


Oh my!  Oh my!  This is exquisite!!!!!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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9 posted 2003-06-20 10:36 AM


Ivy

beautiful beautiful . . .

you know a hug can mean the world if given at the right time by the right person
well no a hug means the world no matter what
so hugs to you - even if they are not the same as you write about
xxoo

Bec
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10 posted 2003-06-20 10:56 AM


hi ivy rose...

awww, this is really nice.

i need a hug!

Bec

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-03-01 12:23 PM


I like your name!

ARCTIC WIND

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