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Never Said Bye |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
From child to adult i look back Such petty thoughts as a child Worrying about the little things Crushes, weight, and looks It seems like last week when i was a child Playing Laughing and being happy oh wait it was last week.... Tossed to an adlut so fast To become someones play toy Why does he enjoy this? What pride comes from this? Only 14 i am faced with reality Slapped in my face so fast and no time to say good bye... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Fourteen, and you write like this! When I think of the dreck I wrote at fourteen.....wow! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
yeah thanks check out some of my other stuff in Dark poetry and some in here.... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
A slap in the face but don't let it leave a mark..trust me enjoy these years as much as you, can its gets better as you go along and high school doesn't have to be as scary as it seems..works much scarier |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
Yeah i have been though hard times but its kinda ok now its like when i write i write poems in like 7 min. so when i write it just comes to me and i have not been though abuse or anything something different |
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Slickcme2 Junior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 11 |
Ill be 14 in a week or so, and i live in the same town as her. I think we had good teachers.haha. |
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Slickcme2 Junior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 11 |
I think she is already an awesome writer. She wrote like 3 of these in like 5 minutes while we were talking on the phone. haha |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
I agree. Your writting is good. What a sad work. Some things are hard to pass, but finding the solution is always a learning expereince. Again, this is a great poem. <>DW<> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Tell me about it . . . enjoy it please please related to this write well Welcome To PIP! xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-19-2003 04:13 AM).] |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I was to a bit surprised concerning your age, I can only imagine what you'll write in the future. Just hold on. Yours truly ~Broken~ Such griefs with such men well agree, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write ARCTIC WIND |
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