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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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My name is underlined in panic. All this blood, and all this pain.. it turns into origami and blows away. As if I weren't tainted, staring at photos half melted because of the sun in my eye. Breath in the stars and set my soul afire. Cross to ash and rise above, the fact that I will never be verily loved.. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh my, this is some great writing here! I felt your heart... I did! Excellent!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this, the images, and under everything the title message. It's very good. [This message has been edited by mirror man (06-18-2003 10:27 PM).] |
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joyfull girl Junior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 15 |
my dear sadness I am always amazed to see when words are put together in such a way to make you feel the sadness but be happy that you were able to experience it good work -Joy |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wanted to welcome you to PIP. Look forward to reading more of your excellent work. Enjoyed the choice of words you selected...old world with a new spin. ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Forgotenandgone Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 52NC |
good poem.... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Touchingly Sad! ARCTIC WIND |
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