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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-06-18 07:40 PM



Here flies the end
cotton white surrender

love beaten
never forgotten

numb relief
escapee of the changed you

your selfishness plagued
every dream sequence

and i disbelieved

alone in love with you
the old you

freedom catches us all.

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-06-18 08:04 PM


Captivating write, enjoyed this a lot!
Magnus
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2 posted 2003-06-18 08:21 PM


Sometimes I believe love is more like a
hurricane.....for a while it drenches you,
then tries to blow you away...then..all of
a sudden it is calm...before the storm
riles again...only from a different direction.

So many variables...

Wind
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3 posted 2003-06-18 08:28 PM


It's all true girl. Great job...

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-06-18 10:46 PM


God, i don't know what to say to this...hugs are better..or a pint..yes yes a pint or two
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2003-06-18 10:47 PM


Electric!
Very well done. TD

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-06-19 02:41 AM


stunning write!
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-06-19 02:58 AM


yes gemma exactly . . . the old you
perfectly said
sorry you know this . . .
sorry I can relate lol

awesome write
always are
xxoo


Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2008-02-23 11:25 AM


I like the name, Its cool!

ARCTIC WIND

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