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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-06-18 09:06 AM


inhale
the air
that melts

like flakes
of snow
immersed

into
the stream
of life

flowing


© Copyright 2003 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-06-18 09:08 AM


. . . like a river Sudhir

I have missed you
beautiful as always
xxoo

Nan
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2 posted 2003-06-18 09:41 AM


Breathe it in - Very nice, Sudhir...
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3 posted 2003-06-18 09:55 AM



Beautiful !
hugs, Chris

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-06-18 10:27 AM


it's beautiful..but I wish our air would start to dry out

too too much rain
M

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-06-18 01:46 PM


Love the subject matter,
the air we breathe...yes!!!

Neat poem Sudhir~


Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-06-18 01:56 PM


Sudhir,
You have seen the river. Enjoyed

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-06-18 03:30 PM


aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
i breathe with the trees,,,,,,,yes!

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8 posted 2003-06-18 03:37 PM


Like a breath of fresh air, Sudhir.....
Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2003-06-19 07:02 AM


Thank you all so very much for your kind words

Regards
Sudhir

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10 posted 2003-06-19 01:54 PM


wonderful write! enjoyed to read
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11 posted 2008-02-23 12:33 PM


Lovely and Poetic!

ARCTIC WIND

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