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my "I am" poem...
| Open Poetry #27 |
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my "I am" poem... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA 
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I am thoughts I am too soon Savory melding Of thoughtful and wonder Full of blunder All asunder I am pain deeply placed I am wonder fully interlaced Failures are many Successes a few Many to critique A few to soothe Time dances on Will more ideas spawn I am soft and hard I am a burgeoning bard Words swimming by Thoughts often nigh Working hard many a try Time dances on I felt an idea spawn I am cool and away I am withering and afraid Far away lights say no So much so many don’t know Life it seems Left time alone Time dances on No more spawn I am me I write I see I am me I am me |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goodknight - yes, and it's good to be I am.... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Paul, this just simply has to be your best piece of work thus far! Amazing insight into you...the I Am of you. You took this challenge and answered it with a twist.. I very much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul...I enjoyed seeing how you wrote this... you are a good and interesting man, and a great friend!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done..I am enjoying how differently everyone is taking the challenge *s M |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
Wow. Great poem. kee on posting. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ah Paul: You ARE the conscience and the hope of the heart...I read it so often in your verse. This was a great challenge, and I am so pleased to read you. TD |
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