navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Still Dancing
Open Poetry #27
Post A Reply Post New Topic Still Dancing Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2003-07-31 05:42 AM



The gypsy still dances
still sways to her own special beat
Her hair flowing wild
in her green eyes a challenge to meet
The fire is burning
but hotter within then without
One look from those eyes
leaves the watcher no reason to doubt…

It’s said that her green eyes
show nothing but gypsy-lust greed
But those she has loved find them full
of her passionate need
And time can’t deny her a spirit
that feeds on the night
Her dance is her own
and for her it is nothing but right…

The music is playing
but still she is dancing alone
There’s nary a gypsy King waiting
to make her his home
Until she meets eyes that can hold
in a spell of entrancing
This gypsy girl-woman will move to her music
Still dancing…


Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-31-2003 08:30 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2003-07-31 06:04 AM


Very nice writing....enjoyed it...

thank you...

Goldenrose.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2003-07-31 06:05 AM


Thank you GR, and I'm a fan of yours also!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-07-31 07:53 AM


shaking my tambourine and twirling my skirt over here--loved this.
Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
4 posted 2003-07-31 08:03 AM


Goodness, this is breathtaking!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2003-07-31 08:24 AM


Hi there serenity blaze, and keep shaking that tambourine!!!!!  Glad to have you out there dancing, and thanks for joining me! ~S~

Hi Saunni, and it's been awhile, hasn't it? I hope the music is still playing, and you are still dancing where you are...thank you too!!  ~S~


Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-31-2003 08:25 AM).]

catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2003-07-31 08:59 AM


Sunny, this reminds me of some of the first of your poems I read. I love the gypsy in you. She lives here inside me too, though she is indeed stifled lately.
Sandra

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Still Dancing

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary