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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-31 04:08 AM



A face, a picture, eyes, hair,
Looking into your eyes, a souls stare,
Paper, an image, a square,

All I have to see you, image, a picture,
No kiss, no touch, just paper,
Ink, color, perfect structure,

Holding you in my hands,
no warmth, no tenderness, coldness,
just a photograph, colorful boldness,

A memory, a moment, captured, frozen in time,
Seeing you, knowing you, wanting to feel,
wishing your image to come off the paper, become real,

I think about the motion of your eyes,
The motion of your lips as you talk,
The movement of your hands and legs as you walk,

When I stare at your pictures,
I can see and hear you laugh and smile,
You become real, so real to me for awhile,

Your poems I read, I see your face,
Your hands with paper and pen,
Going inside my mind, viewing the places you've been,

One picture your sitting on a bench at the park,
As I close my eyes, I see me there,
watching you as you talk, wind blowing your hair,

Another photo you and your faithful bike,
Your gentle smile, I see you riding through town,
Going to the library, shops, places you hang around,

Every moment of your life captured within twenty-four photos,
Twenty-four views I have of you,
Twent-four ways to know you more,

Each one, a treasure, a part of you,
Printed on paper, shipped and sent for me,
I have you, but only pieces of paper do you send,
I want the whole you completely, but all I have is...twenty-four pieces of you inside my hands.


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-31-2003 04:10 AM).]

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-07-31 04:12 AM


this is heart-breaking...I can feel the longing and desire so deeply in this...I wish you two could be together
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-07-31 04:32 AM


Thanks Dixie....so do I....painfully wishing! with all my heart!

~Thanks~ARH

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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3 posted 2003-07-31 04:36 AM


It will happen my love...just you wait amd see if it doesent...great poetry...written from the overflowing well of your heart....

thank you my love.....

Love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2003-07-31 04:47 AM


My love, my sweet slice of apple pie, my heart will wait, but it is aching...I will see and wait...dip into the well of my heart for your loves eternal flow!

Thank you my sweetest poet king~xxx love ARH

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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5 posted 2003-07-31 05:49 AM


Patience...your day will come...James
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2003-07-31 05:54 AM


Patience is hard...especially when your in love...but love is patient and kind....and my heart can endure for the reward in sight!

~Thanks James

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