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An Ordinary Man
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An Ordinary Man |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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You would probably laugh and say they lack significance But to one who loves you, they’re the most precious of moments. I stop whatever I’m doing each time you mow the lawn To admire manly beauty that’s not just result of brawn You go about your business, doing what needs to be done Sweat pouring down your body as you toil out in the sun. I’m reminded of the many times sweat has soaked our sheets From vigorous sharing of love and numerous repeats And an appreciation for you fills my heart and eyes I’m a very lucky woman... and this I realize. I try to wake before you just so I can watch you sleep An overflowing tenderness may let a few tears seep Your face is free from worries that you try so to conceal And a younger, vulnerable man is in rest revealed. I know responsibilities are what carved all those lines Wonder how many of your dreams have had to be confined To do what’s best for everyone else? How can I thank you For doing what you without hesitation always do? I watch you laughing at yourself when some obnoxious chore Bests you for a moment... but then you tackle it once more I know that you’re exhausted when you get home from your work But you shoulder other burdens, without being a jerk. So many times I’ve seen you brush the tiredness from your eyes And hurry to answer little ones and their plaintive cries For Dad to play just one more game... and help us build a fort! There’s more to being head of house than financial support. So you’re a sight for these sore eyes when dressed in Sunday best But your goodness shines all the time... and you really impress. Four years ago, I followed a group of friends onto these blue pages and settled in. *S* This poem has nothing to do with that. *G* But I can't let the anniversary pass without saying: Thank you, Ron Carnell... for giving me a home where I could find poetic encouragement... and meet people who would change my life in ways I never dreamed. *S* Writes like these of happy home life are still imagination... but PIP has definitely given me a happier life... and I thank you for giving me a room with a view in this home you've created! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (07-29-2003 12:11 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my what a wonderful tribute to a loving family man! Isn't it great to just watch them when they don't know it?  This is so very special..for so many reasons. Happy Passions Anniversary!! And thank you for all that you bring to us! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You can look out of my window anytime you like. LOL Wonderful write.  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
4 years huh? *shakes her head*....I was old then and now you remind me that its been 4 years.... ok, go ahead and make me feel old... lol.....and applaud your wonderful poetry...love this lady....even though it is pure fantasy for me.....sigh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear suthern this is a wonderful, very touching tribute to your man. There is love, tenderness and gratitude ... awareness of the gift you have been given. ... you stir something within my heart .... And congratulations for your FOUR years of permanence in this home of Passions! Love, Margherita  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Gosh, this is gorgeous. What a beautiful scene, and what beautiful emotions. Happy Anniversary. glad you're here. heres to many more years on the blue. much love, gem xxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Enchantress: They are special… whatever family they belong to. * S* Thank you so much, kind lady. * S* Seymour: I’d love to! LOL But I’ll have to keep one eye watching out for Isabel sneaking up to land her frying pan on my head! LOL Thank you, dear friend. *S*  jellybeans: And you think it’s not fantasy here???? LOL My cats are both females… and they don’t do chores… no matter how appreciative I promise to be. *G* Thank you OLD o & o… but aren’t you younger than me? LOL Margherita: I have been given a great gift… not exactly the one I wrote about, but the poem wouldn’t exist if I hadn’t been gifted. *S* Thank you so much… I’m glad it touched you. *S* gempop: Your response delights me… and I thank you so much! *S* and four is just a beginning… fair warning *G* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Happy Fourth, Suthern! What would we do without our Passions? My little corner of the world would be a much sorrier place, of that, I am sure! Congratulations! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
auntie  HuggsZzzzzzz -- has it been 4 years since we migrated????*chuckle* beanie babie -- if you're 4 years older then we all are so it doesn't count -- besides -- you'll always be the foxiest HFG around |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
lol, well I guess I hadn't thought of it that way...I still see you guys as when I met you.....*laughing*...I guess we are all getting old.....older that is, we ain't 'old' yet.....*grin* and lol@cats...yep, can't see cats doing chores... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That fellow would probably describe himself as ordinary, but if he knew (and he would) that somebody saw him like that, he'd feel like Superman. There's the heroism that earns you medals in five horrific minutes, and there's the heroism that leads you quietly to do what needs to be done for years and years, with no thought of a material reward, because it needs doing and you're the one who should. And by the way, I know for a fact that you qualify -- you've done this very thing yourself, and yes, for years and years..... An excellent piece of poetry, Suthern lass...here's to four more years, and lots more after that! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
The universe is old God is old Us... we're still um awake! that's good! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
yep, could absolutely testify that I am awake....*nods her head really seriously* after that we might get into trouble...but I am awake....rofg and lol@suthern and her cats...am still smiling...at least you have an imaginary yard, with an imaginary man mowing the grass...I don't even have grass....lol, much less the imagination or creativity to write about a wonderful man mowing it......*smile* can I just ask if you buy your cats catnip? *concerned look* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunshine: Considering the angst I experienced when unable to access for a while this afternoon, I’d need the ‘stute! LOL Thank you very much! Nephew: Yup… four years today for Toe and me. *S* And Ron’s probably still wondering why he didn’t just slam the door in our faces... or send that sailor overboard before he could give us directions. *G* Yums... leather huggzzzzzzzs *G* (But speak for yourself about that awake schtuff! LOL) HFG: Behave yourself before I tattle about how you acquired those initials. LOL The cats create chores... but don’t lift a paw to help. *G* And no… I don’t buy catnip... had some to plant this year, but they nibbled so enthusiastically on my basil and mint that I never planted cat drugs. *G* I was too busy replanting basil and mint! LOL Ratleader: I’ve always heard that courage isn’t lack of fear... but acting in spite of fear. *S* And in the same vein, real heroes don’t wear capes or soar above skyscrapers or capture news headlines... they simply do what needs done... over and over again. *S* Whether or not I’m in their ranks, I have more appreciation for them than those who bask forever in the glow of a 5 minute accomplishment. *S* Thank you so much, my friend... yes indeed. *S* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fantasy poem or not...your gift of rhyme comes in only second to your sincerety of expression. As to your anniversary...Pips is better for having you here...and I, for one am grateful for the chance to have gotten to know you beyond the poetry and put a voice with the rhymes. By the way poetry land...Ruth has the most wonderful laugh. Thank you for all you have shared and that I have learned from you, both personally and in your poetry.Happy Anniversary Ruth |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I wish I could have been there more for mine....ahhh...but there's lottsa things I'd do different...nicely written gal.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Suthern... The tears streamed down my cheeks as I read...the tears still continue. Now this is what it should be...thanks for reminding what love truly is. Wonderful write! Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice tribute and happy 4th Suthern  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
JM: That gratitude's a two-way street, yanno. *S* But are you SURE you're not fond of my laugh just cause it contrasts with my usual sniveling? LOL Thank you so much, kind lady! *S* Toerag: You raised fine children who adore you, my friend... I'd say you did things right. *S* Thank you very much! JamesMichael: I'm glad... thank you! Patricia: Your tears honor and humble me... and even if I know it mainly through observation, I'm so glad it exists... and reminds. *S* Thank you! vandana: Thank you... I'm glad. *S* ecrivan: Thank you very much! *S* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ruth....I was deeply touched by your words in this poem, even though you call it your imagination, you must have learned somewhere, how it should be. Any woman would be blessed to have your "ordinary man". Happy Anniversary!! |
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