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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-07-24 01:21 PM



HO HO HO
and away I go
again
I'm off...
(don't laugh)
off and running
to another casa
on the greener (?) side
of the Rockies trail
(no, not Boulder).

*sigh*

I can't seem to sink solid roots
in these Rockies,
can't seem to stay put,
just know how to
grab my tattered bags
and head out again to
another  
ho down,
here comes the road
and I'm always
the third runner up...
so poor gypsy gal
packs up
one well worn camelhair bikini
with well-used coffee
pot
and trusty PC
and leaves
the nosey neighbors
in a cloud of dust,
again.

*sigh*


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Ladybug
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1 posted 2003-07-24 01:30 PM


Hmmm...the title caught me, hee hee.  I liked this poem, it was very catchy, had a nice rhythm to it, very playful!

"with well-used coffee
pot
and trusty PC"  
<-- hmmm, the line break for "pot" is interesting...normally, you would want "coffee pot" to remain, uninterrupted, unless of course, this has double meaning, lol.  

Good poem!

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-07-24 01:32 PM


Oh that kind of ho! grins
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2003-07-24 01:40 PM



I'm packing as fast as I can!
Miss Kitty has to get outta Dodge????

(Crazy cryptic remark refers to the fact
I borrowed a Dodge Caravan today so I wouldn't have to pay for a UHAULITANDSAVEBUCKS truck.

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-07-24 07:13 PM


Kacy
I could never picture you stuck up in one place for too long anyhow . . .
all those presents to deliver and all
ehe
get back quickly please
and safely
xxoo

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5 posted 2003-07-24 07:20 PM


lol...we are all hoes..just take another look at the thread..lol. Guessing this is where this came from since you called yourself a gypsy ho..you can never sit still can you

have fun


[This message has been edited by Wind (07-24-2003 07:28 PM).]

Martie
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6 posted 2003-07-24 07:23 PM


Good luck, Kasy...turn on electric and plug in computer first!
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