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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-07-23 09:40 AM




~~0~~
The sounds of our dreams
gently dancing in our thoughts
softly whispering to our minds
of all our many plans

Plans of our future life
together with each other
We talk softly of our plans
as softly as the sounds
of the wind and of the
gentle waves splashing in water

Sounding soft, yet they are clear
clear as the skies are
on a warm summer night
with stars sparkling
in brilliance of light
as glimmering diamonds

As clear, are the sounds
of our dreams as they
are heard through our
minds as whispers
gently dancing
in our thoughts
~~0~~



revisited, slightly revised







© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
gemjop
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1 posted 2003-07-23 09:53 AM


What a gorgeous photo, to compiment such beautiful words and feelings. I can just imagine you and Gary strolling along a beach much like this at sunset. I know its one of your favourite things, and you descibe it so well!
You never have to worry, I truly believe he will never let you down, and will make plans and make them reality with you always.

Good morning to you Ethel Mae, thanks for brightening up my day!

love to you and Gary
gem xxxx

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PKreturns
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2 posted 2003-07-23 10:04 AM


Very soft and gentle and nice poetry.
peppermint35
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3 posted 2003-07-23 10:27 AM


Lovely picture and even lovelier painting you made with those words.. thanks for sharing the beauty

Pepper
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Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-07-23 10:30 AM


This really speaks to me, Dear EM! Simply beautiful.

Loves & hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2003-07-23 10:43 AM


Gemma, thank you so very much. You always
have the sweetest replies. Gary and I both
appreciate them. Thanks again.  
I hope that you have a good day today, my friend.
Love ya,  
Ethel Mae and Gary    

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6 posted 2003-07-23 10:46 AM


PK, that is a very nice reply. I thank
you very much.  
.
Pepper, what a nice thing to say. Thank you
so very much.  
.
Linda, thank you, dear lady. I'm really
glad that this poem spoke to you.
.
.
I really do appreciate all of you and thank you each
for your sweet replies. Ya'll are just great!!
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-07-23 02:43 PM


Very nice...James
littlewing
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8 posted 2003-07-23 02:53 PM


Ethel;

what insight you have used here:

As clear, are the sounds
of our dreams as they
are heard through our
minds as whispers
gently dancing
in our thoughts

like whisps of the future lingering about
very nice writing
xxoo

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9 posted 2003-07-23 06:23 PM


Hello miss Ethel Mae, I just though id take a break from my deppression and visit you and gary here in your lovly poem..And whatdoyaknow? it worked
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10 posted 2003-07-23 07:03 PM



Lovely, lovely...
photos and words...
and love....

SharaRose
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11 posted 2003-07-23 07:11 PM


Very pretty,..always a treat to read.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2003-07-23 11:46 PM


Your love continues to shine so crystal clear.

Loved this Ethel, it's so you at your very best!

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