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Queen Of Swords
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Queen Of Swords |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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I can see you You don't think I can But I can see out of this mirror And watch you watching me For the answers to your life From where I stand You are forgetting yourself And ignoring those around you Who want nothing more than to help One they see has the potential to be great It is you who views yourself Too narrowly for your own good The future is there for you to take But you cannot do it alone That dishonors all whom you touch You are tired from the fight So it's time to think of yourself Find the larger view And do what's best For the man I stare back at Everyday We see the light of those |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Bradley, I've been reading you more often lately, and u never disappoint. when you wrote larger view. I thought for a few seconds you said lager view, as in beer. and it made sense in my brain. lol. just thought i'd share that. into my library. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad: You are forgetting yourself And ignoring those around you Who want nothing more than to help God, why do we do this? I know . . . I know xxoo |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
This is great in the visuals of the introspection in the mirror. I like thinking like this too. I only have one question, where does the title come from? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I can see you You don't think I can But I can see out of this mirror And watch you watching me For the answers to your life Brad, I love this beginning. Oh, and it's really good to see you popsting more. I've missed you being around as much as before.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Gemma- Coming from you, the words mean alot. I am constantly enjoying your writes, even if I don't always comment on them... and maybe I DID mean lager!!!! lol Sue- Why? Because we like you... M-O-U-S-EEEEEEEE... uh... oops!!! sorry. Thanks for reading my scribbles. PK- the Queen of Spades is one of the 72 cards in a tarot deck. The write is the basic meaning of the card. Ethyl- Thank you very kindly for your kindness. I am glad you enjoyed this write. We see the light of those |
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