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vlraynes
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0 posted 2003-07-20 10:35 PM



Ah...The Power of Cheese

Hello friends, I'm so happy you've come
Though to some this may seem rather dumb
My wish, though admittedly 'cheesy'
That you'll leave here tonight saying 'yum'

You may think the stories inflated
That cheese is, somehow, over-rated
But sit back and listen a moment
Don't leave me alone feeling hated

My friends, there are all kinds of cheeses
Some chunky, some sliced, and some squeezes
No matter your taste in consumption
It's sure you'll find something that pleases

Some cheeses belong on a pizza
While others go well on a Ritz'a
When seeking the right midnight snacker
Get Cheesy Poofs...they're sure to please ya

Now, take it from me, friends, don't doubt it
I know what I'm talking about it
You see, they call me the Great Cheese Wiz
And 'cooler than cheese', that's what I is!

~vlraynes


Only for you, Rhonda...LOL.
*crawls into the nearest hole...with a bag of cheetos for comfort*


"it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease
to exist than to exist forever and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-20-2003 10:39 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2003-07-20 10:40 PM


Crunchy right?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-07-20 10:41 PM



Absolutely!

"it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease
to exist than to exist forever and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

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3 posted 2003-07-20 10:45 PM


Vicky, I love  cheese...and I
like the crunchy cheetos instead of the puffs.
I like grilled cheese sandwiches, loads of cheese on pizza, cheese on my salads, macaroni and cheese....and on and on.....
so, you know I love this cheesy poem.  HeeHee!!

Hey, I think I'll go get a piece of cheese and a ritz-a.  LOL

Hugs to you and our little Rhonda     
Ethel


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-20-2003 10:47 PM).]

Larry C
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4 posted 2003-07-20 10:55 PM


And Vicky, thanks for your help and caring!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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5 posted 2003-07-20 10:56 PM


Rolling on the floor here Mum!!!    This is brilliant!! *wipes the tears from her eyes* LMAO  I'm honoured to have inspired such a masterpiece (the scary thing is that I'm dead serious LOL) *bows humbley*
I will talk to YOU later, and there is NO DOUBT that you are way cooler than cheese

... Even though you're gone ...

Nan
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6 posted 2003-07-21 03:33 PM


This is pretty darned cheesy in my opinion...
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7 posted 2003-07-21 07:26 PM



Geeeeezzzzzz~

I mean Cheeeeeeeeeezeeee !

Love it when the *giggle-muses* play at your house my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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8 posted 2003-07-21 08:13 PM


Darn it, Vicky...I'm lactose intollerant!!  
Bonnie j
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9 posted 2003-07-21 08:33 PM


Cheeze It, Gobs of cheese on a pizza nice and stringy. Yum.........
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10 posted 2003-07-21 08:36 PM


Did anyone bring crackers?  Cute and fun...

believe in what your heart feels...

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11 posted 2003-07-21 08:37 PM


Oh my..cheese is one of my weaknesses...
Love it!!!
Cool write Vicky!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Miah
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12 posted 2003-07-21 09:45 PM


Cheese is such a comfort food.  ahhhh cheese...
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13 posted 2003-07-22 01:54 AM


My vending machine is going to owe you for this!!!  

Kielo
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14 posted 2003-07-22 03:05 AM


ROFL! You're my hero! And I don't even like cheese! LOL

Kielo

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15 posted 2003-07-22 03:09 AM


more cheese please!!!!!


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