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dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23
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caddyshack

0 posted 2003-07-19 12:23 PM



What is your reality?
Is it where you are,
or is it here?

What do you believe in,
when you believe in others
more than you believe in yourself?

Do you write to free yourself,
or to show others your prison?
Wheres the key to your soul?

Do you come as a friend...
only to harm those closest to you?
Who are your enemies?

How do you Love,
when the mask you wear
is more real than you?

How do you dream
when you're not really real?
Is reality your dream?

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream  . . .

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-07-19 03:34 PM


Can I come back to this when my migraine is gone? Interesting write, just too many mind-probing Q's for me this afternoon.
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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2 posted 2003-07-19 04:26 PM


Hey Mike, this right here:

Do you write to free yourself,
or to show others your prison?
Wheres the key to your soul?


Good question:  of which I guess
to show others but then again, I cannot
stay away from writing or here no matter
what . . . so yes, it is a two-sided coin.
My presence shows my pain, yet heals by words of others at the same time.  
As for the key to my soul,
I dont think even the man above
knows what that is . . .

Nice thoughts -
xxoo  

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-19-2003 04:27 PM).]

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-07-19 05:38 PM


What is your reality?
Is it where you are,
or is it here?

some days i paint the sky,
some days the sky paints me
its all so convuluted, but clear at the same time to me.........i seek what i need at the time.....if this makes sense, dreamboat,
you can ride the carosel

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