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Wind
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0 posted 2003-07-17 08:44 PM



Why does it never rain on Thursday?

sleeping's for quiters,
I never had the time

And yet,
I have the time to
press rewind-
over
and over.

some songs never fade
and I lie here,
that same sound
pounding
in my head

No one ever told me
to open my eyes at night

I see everything,
then-
rewind

(ok my friends, I won't be here for a week or so, so this will be my last post for a while. Note to self,
next time you vivit relatives-
bring more than one cd. I'll try to check in every once in a while, but this computer is SLOW.

Ok Duncan, if you hapen by this, I can't get into my email account, so we'll have to wait a while)

© Copyright 2003 Liz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-17 09:07 PM


Wind, you are simply adorable. Have fun while you are away...and I loved this write. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Wind
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2 posted 2003-07-18 09:53 AM


Thanks Nancy, I appreciate the reply
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3 posted 2003-07-18 08:03 PM


"And yet,
I have the time to
press rewind-
over
and over.

some songs never fade
and I lie here,
that same sound
pounding
in my head

No one ever told me
to open my eyes at night

I see everything,
then-
rewind"

I don't say this too often but dang I wish I'd written that.  This is some great poetry Liz!  

(Wow...life without email, I vaguely remember the days.  If you want to finish the one you sent me and we'll do another, that's cool with me.  I'm hoping for a weekend of slackin' myself.     

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4 posted 2003-07-19 04:03 AM


Hurry back we miss your insanity
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5 posted 2003-07-19 11:53 AM


awesome write, missy

hurry back!

Wind
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6 posted 2003-07-19 02:36 PM


thanks, you three. I was afraid I would only get one reply. but that doesn't happen here
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7 posted 2003-07-19 03:23 PM


Beautiful and creative.
Eric

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8 posted 2003-07-20 05:46 PM


i've missed you.

Wind
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9 posted 2003-07-20 05:49 PM


Missed ya too   lol, I was at target buying the new radiohead cd

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-20-2003 05:51 PM).]

Aenimal
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10 posted 2003-07-20 06:08 PM


what cd did you keep replaying btw?

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11 posted 2003-07-20 06:09 PM


hehe...guess

you can tell by the words i used..in some places

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-20-2003 06:10 PM).]

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12 posted 2003-07-20 06:10 PM


You thought you would only get one reply?
With a wonderfully creative piece like this?
You are amazing.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Wind
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13 posted 2003-07-20 06:11 PM


Nancy- you are such a sweetie
Aenimal
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14 posted 2003-07-20 06:12 PM


No idea Raph no function well beer without
Wind
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15 posted 2003-07-20 06:13 PM


well I'm not telling you beerbelly
Aenimal
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16 posted 2003-07-20 06:20 PM


Hey I represent that! I mean resent..ah phbllllllllllttttttttttttt
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17 posted 2003-07-20 06:21 PM


It never rains on Thursday, because that is not the day when we need it not too! Mother Nature waits until the W/E!

Sleeping is for quitters? Then I must not be a quitter! I'm a 4-hours-a-night-sleeper and I still have megawatts of energy during the day!

Huggums,
Wind


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18 posted 2003-07-20 06:22 PM


I wake up constantly- and play my depressing music.

(OK Raph- there's more hints in the other poem...ok that was too much of a hint)

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19 posted 2003-07-20 06:56 PM


This is beautiful Wind,
I like your nick.
Greetings,
Etain.

Wind
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20 posted 2003-07-20 06:58 PM


ehh..my nick?
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