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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-07-16 11:39 PM




This little poem I write
might not be understood
Before I got my little Scooter
I surely never could

Understand how my friend could love
her little dog like a baby
I even told her that it might
be just a little too much, maybe

But then for a gift
I got this little dog of mine
It has been a year and a half now
and we get along real fine

I've had pets all my life
and I really did love them
But this one I'm more attached to
I hope I'll always have him

From the start he has been
as special as can be
Because he was a Christmas present
that my Love gave to me

I never did like to let
in the house a dog to stay
But little Scooter from the start
in here most of the day

With him in my bed
I even let him sleep
That started out when just a puppy
and in his bed he would weep

I know when I talk about him
some think I'm mighty silly
But like my friend said to me
it doesn't matter, really

I've got my Love, my daughter,
my family and lots of friends
But my little Scooter
a loving ear always lends

He listens to me when I have
happiness, troubles, or woes
It seems that with his instincts
my moods he always knows

When I come home from going places
and doing things I have to do
He greets me with such love and joy
like I've been gone for a year or two

So, if every now and then
a poem like this you see
I'm just talking about my little Scooter
who is like a "baby" to me



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[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-16-2003 11:43 PM).]

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JaiOfHeaven
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1 posted 2003-07-16 11:46 PM


It made me feel an appreciation...
for animals really.
How, unlike people, they seem always happy
to see you when you've been away.
Even for a moment...
just a little while.
Kinda makes me wish I had one to call my
own..ya know?

Jai

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2 posted 2003-07-16 11:52 PM


Hi Jai  
Thanks for reading and your reply. Yeah, I call
my little Scooter my four-legged baby.  LOL

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~  Heart hugs, Ethel

anwaarhassan
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3 posted 2003-07-17 12:07 PM


Very nice and cute - both the poem and the puppy....reminds me of my first puppy...a lhasa apso...Your effections for the puppy come out really well in this poem.

Anwaar.

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4 posted 2003-07-17 12:52 PM


better than humans most days..i miss Snoopy and King more than i do the friends who owned them..lol
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5 posted 2003-07-17 01:13 AM


Great write here and so understood! I have a cat and his name is Acetin. He is almost 30 pounds and is only a year old. But, he is heaven sent, and follows me just like a dog. Pets are great. Wonderful write.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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6 posted 2003-07-17 01:23 AM


nice puppy... cute
vlraynes
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7 posted 2003-07-17 01:28 AM



Ethel...this is adorable. ...and so is Scooter.
Thanks for sharing him with us.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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8 posted 2003-07-17 02:14 AM


Anwaar, thank you. I appreciate your nice reply.  
.
Raph, thank you. My brother and his wife
had a little dog named Snoopy  one time.  
.
Saunmir, your cat sounds like Gary's Dad's
cat. He's as big or bigger than my dog. My dog weighs about 18 lbs.
.
.
Heart hugs to you all  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-07-17 02:27 AM


Reb Hawke, thank you for reading me. Yep,
he looks like a puppy, but he's grown already.
He's fat but has little ole short legs, like
a dachshund.  
.
Vicky, thank you for reading me, too. Yeah
I love my little Scooter.  
.
.
Hugs  
Ethel

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