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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-16 08:01 AM


Her
tongue burns
words struck
against the grain
blue flame
the ice amidst warm
raising child
at arms length
only close
alliance
lies in hate
forcibly met
with stunted
soul.

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Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-07-16 08:12 AM


......wow
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-07-16 02:28 PM


Goodness, Gemma...
This is strong.  
Hugs to you, my friend  
Ethel Mae

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-07-16 02:41 PM


Your thoughts always deserve a second read!

Huggums,
EA

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-07-16 03:04 PM


Thankyou for reading. This was for my brother. He's the most warm hearted man, and unfortunately has someone from his past whom he shall never be rid of. It breaks my heart when i see him broken by her hard heart and pathetic words.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-07-16 05:20 PM


Enjoyed your words...James
JaiOfHeaven
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6 posted 2003-07-16 08:23 PM


My heart aches for some reason right now and I don't know why...I pray that he is loosened from her clutch and chain.
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