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JaiOfHeaven
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0 posted 2003-07-16 04:19 AM



Lollying mesmericly,
thoughts lazily waver and dissapate.
While blissful memories all mesh into a fantasy,
Embracing the luminous light of my soul,
Intense brightness unfolds blinding.

Incandescent flashes oversaturating with color tell a story,
where realistic mirages thrive in some merry illusion.
Omni-present flaring shades of light illuminate,
consume,
and shred my mind apart into little peices,
fluttering up into a heavenly ocean of stars,
like butterflies floating on a whispering breeze that uplifts their fears.

Voids of pure white suck me into oblivion,
The overflowing light perpetuously feeding me what is in awe of ecstasy.
Infinite brightness protrudes me,
In the arms of his mysterious soul.
My blood flows tranquily,
and like night to day tensions fade.

Forgotten stresses in an azure dream.

© Copyright 2003 Byron Keith Landry Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JaiOfHeaven
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1 posted 2003-07-16 05:19 AM


hm....
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-07-16 10:25 PM


very nice,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


anwaarhassan
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3 posted 2003-07-17 12:59 PM


Very eloquent and descriptive... enjoyed reading this.

Anwaar.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-07-17 01:10 AM


Mesmerizingly lovely! The imagery was vivid and colorful. Enjoyed your azure dream.

Sweet dreams forevermore...
EA

JaiOfHeaven
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5 posted 2003-07-17 05:23 AM


Thanks. The imagery is meant for you to enjoy.
Not only that...
It's kinda hard for me not to give it.
Makes me feel like i'm cheating you all if i don't.

Jai

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