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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-16 04:18 AM





Brine's House of Love


Evenings sunset softly glows across the clear painted horizon of the frothy turquoise seas,

Peacefully sitting upon the blanket of soft golden sand, your gentle hand enclosed in mine, inside your eyes, sunsets reflection I do see,

Fresh oceans salty breeze magically dances across your beaming face, for this our dream, loves eternal resting place,

Seagulls in unison soar way above us in open periwinkle blue skies, as a single heartfelt tear begins to form in my dark brown eyes,

So very long ago, this was our hearts dream, our tattered, old beach house, quietly sitting on an oceanfront hill, me painting the oceans scenes, you writing mythical stories, poems, from heart, mind, with quill,

The graceful, delicate seagulls constantly remind me of our love, so free, gentle, riding the wind beneath their feathered wings,

At nights edge, when full yellow moon glows, cascading down upon the beach, in soft silence you can hear the waves of the ocean sing,

Tranquil serene comfort, love nest where love resides, laughter and unending happiness always abides,

My sweet soul quietly rests, laying deeply into your loving heart, my contented life with you has been as beautiful, as free as the peaceful spirit of the morning dove,

You and I share a lifetime, soulful companions, just like us, our oceans house weathered all the storms of life, paint chipped, unpainted beauty, our oceans house of love...


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-16-2003 04:56 AM).]

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JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
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1 posted 2003-07-16 04:23 AM


Nice...

[This message has been edited by JaiOfHeaven (07-16-2003 04:26 AM).]

JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
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2 posted 2003-07-16 04:25 AM


Romantic heart indeed. heh. Gotta love them beach houses! You're a good writer Don't worry about your heart being broken, just head back to the house of love...lol
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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3 posted 2003-07-16 04:35 AM


Absolutely brilliantly beautiful...as each day passes your poetry gets better and better....it is stronger now....the passion has died down slightly and for the better...but the depth and maturity of your love shines through....you are ''seing'' things better now too..more focused on the detail....''paint peeling'' etc...before you might say a seagull passed over now you describe and ''control'' how it passes over and what speed it goes....thank you my love...you are certainly getting more confident and writing just excelantly....

love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


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