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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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0 posted 2003-07-15 11:56 PM


Don Juan could never find its fill
passions not lost
greater than will

Shakespeare found heart
words upon it
each pain
each beat
with a sonnet

Edgar Poe wrote of its passing
bells that have told
everlasting

Through it all
from fill to its aches
love bleeding
is what
his soul takes

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Tim
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1 posted 2003-07-16 12:05 PM


interesting read, enjoyed.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-07-16 12:34 PM


The written words are meant to bleed through.
Dontcha know?  I enjoyed this change of style on you Craig~

I hope all is well in your world.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-07-16 01:04 AM


Yes Craig, love can be a pain.

How is the moon looking from your POV tonight? Waxing, or waning?
Smiling a big hello to you, friend.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-07-16 01:13 AM


Craig, this is very interesting. I enjoyed
reading it.  
Hugs  
Ethel

timothysangel1973
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5 posted 2003-07-16 01:15 AM


Well...the vote is in:  We loved it!

Great write!  


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