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"She" Doesn't Deserve You
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"She" Doesn't Deserve You |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC 
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"She" doesn't deserve you, she lost that right I hate how she treats you sometimes. I can't stand to hear of the loneliness she puts you through every night. She must have some type of hold on you, I didn't expect you to stay around, But she's the one you close your eyes to At night, without a touch, or a sound. Each night I'm left with empty arms Longing for your body to hold. "There's no love left here, but I can't leave now." I often wonder if your heart's been sold. I see the passion you have, that you put down in words And I still can't understand why "She" thinks she deserves a small part of you And I'm scared slowly your spirit will die. For six brief years you've taught me about love Hell, I didn't know I could feel so much If I had just one chance to feel your warmth Maybe I'd melt some of her icy touch. You and I both were tossed a wrong deal In this life that's given us so much pain If we didn't have so much to lose We'd have each other to gain. I'll always say she doesn't deserve you I'll always wonder why you couldn't leave I jokingly said the world only likes love songs But deep down love songs are what I believe. So we'll go on living our lives apart Meeting for brief moments stolen online Maybe one day soon, maybe in some other life I'll be the one to deserve you this time. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
If we didn't have so much to lose We'd have each other to gain. Nice lines, sad poem, good write Carolina~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Caroline, this is really sad. I hope things get better. You wrote about it very well.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sad indeed...best hopes to you |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
back to the top with you.  I know some of this Late at night you'll come crawling back |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think we all know of relationships like this...where one is being taken advantage of...some feel comfortable in these types of relationships...some wish to escape...James |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Maybe one day soon, maybe in some other life I'll be the one to deserve you this time. Gosh, this pulls on my brain. So sad. Isn't it funny how those people who do not appreciate what they have often have someone or something so precious. yet those who would give the world in love, and appreciate how lucky they are, end up without. Sigh...keep on hoping and believing. I'm right here with ya gal.  |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
You spoke your heart. I guess there's always a place inside me for that kind of openess. Hope all goes well... Jai |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
WOW have you been in my head? I can't tell you how many times I have longed for someone to realize this about ME!!  Big Hugs |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC |
Thank you, everyone. It did come straight from my heart. It's like finding a huge diamond among all the coal...only someone's picked it up....hasn't put it back down yet..probably doesn't realize it's a diamond..and you stand there eyeballing it.. hoping they put it down so you can grab it, take it home, and nuture it back to the brilliant gem that it once was. (and I can also relate this to finding a beautiful shirt that you see, go to grab it.. someone else gets to it first..and stands there holding it.. knowing it's NOT her size. LOL And you wait for her to put it back on the rack so you can buy it.) I just wanted him to know that I see all that he radiates, and I do see deeper into him than he knows. I always have. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
perhaps CG... perhaps... maybe he gets exactly what he deserves...?? doesn't sound like he deserves you at all though.. |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC |
LR, perhaps he only thinks he deserves it? Perhaps he thinks he has to pay his dues...but I think he's paid them long ago. He should have alot of credit saved up by now. LOL |
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