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x8x_bigmike
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0 posted 2003-07-14 05:49 PM


dateless
days tredding
sand trapped,
unparoled

when shudders close
she comes haunting
forcing herself
into my mouth
an unwelcome
rape of my hate

yet, as night falls
I trail off into memory
shudders close
butterflies steal my no
my freedoms detour
timelessly hers?
or insecure?

[This message has been edited by x8x_bigmike (07-14-2003 07:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-07-14 05:51 PM


Oh wow! This is sooo good, I love it!

x8x_bigmike
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2 posted 2003-07-14 06:30 PM


thank you for your support

Mike

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