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Leave me be
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Leave me be |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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“Let me be,” I cried I cannot again Succumb to ride Weary of body Fragmented of mind “I wouldn’t survive” Allow me the dignity Of not trying Of not giving in As I know where it would end I can no longer take That kind of pain So take your good intentions And your kind deeds I am beyond redemption Leave me be |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So take your good intentions And your kind deeds I am beyond redemption Leave me be Yep, Susan....sometimes we just want to be left alone, don't we?  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I feel this one *nodding head* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you for the replies. I wonder why it is some people wait until it's too late? Sigh...their loss. Hugs to you both  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
BS.... you'd survive... and you know it would probably make you stronger...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ron, If I allowed myself to fall for his "charm" again I would not survive the self-loathing. Susan  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Damnn Susan . . . reaching into the pit of my stomach today you are this is amazing xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I felt this one with you, Susan...well said. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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