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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-07-13 03:13 PM


Written for a blind girls mother i know she read it to her and she had a big smile from my poem.

Hope you lot like it too


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Blinded…

Blinded from the moment
She entered this world of many emotions
Not seeing her creators
Or the pain and hurt that floats through this world
Destroying all the happiness that now hides

Not been able to see this terrible sight
That affect peoples Minds
Trapping them in reoccurring thoughts
Of the pain they have suffered
From terrible experiences only viewed by eyes

They will see it everyday
Till their forgotten deaths
Flow over the world rejoining the current
Within the earth itself
The river of life that makes new borns arise

But in senses…

The blind woman’s Artificial eyes
Not needing real eyes
To feel the pain and hurt inside
That this world brings to every living thing

The smell of death lingers in the air
Also the smell of blood that many hold
Upon their skins tore abused

Also in touch…

The tightness of the grip upon her arms
Sends signals to the mind
Telling them if the person infront
Is kind, or an evil twisted soul?
Set lose upon this world
To be the hatred that fights the Happiness

Soon she will find her love
The one to bring her the happiness
That anyone would adore
A child, a gift from her to the side of happiness
Keeping hope alive for the goodness of this world

Her child born with eyes that see
The creator that could never see back
Yet the child smiles and becomes her eyes
And the blind woman smiles inside

The angel, her child she brought to this world
Will bring her happiness
By fighting off the shadows of the night
And teaching her that things
Do matter in this world of Hatred and pain
Only the happiness inside…



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1 posted 2003-07-13 03:16 PM


Lovely write!
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