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Temptress
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0 posted 2003-07-13 03:20 AM


The absence of your voice
is a presence.
I cannot escape its shadow.

Late at night you'll come crawling back
Just to steal a piece of me

"Default"

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-13 03:22 AM


wow...you're good at these!
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2003-07-13 04:02 AM



Oh how I know this one.
You've expressed it well.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Janette
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3 posted 2003-07-13 11:42 AM


Oh mannnnnn ... I hate it when it is like this ... the haunting of it all ... but more so the not knowing.

Hang in there girl friend.

Local Rebel
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4 posted 2003-07-13 12:15 PM


deafening....

hopefully the presense of compatriots passes the time

Don't tell me to get a life -- I have one on backorder.


Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-07-13 12:46 PM


Amazing
Honeybee
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6 posted 2003-07-13 02:24 PM


Damn...just wow...

Melissa

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Kaoru
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7 posted 2003-07-13 02:25 PM


Beautiful!
littlewing
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8 posted 2003-07-13 04:01 PM


Jenn:

this is brilliant
xxoo

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-07-13 04:58 PM


Very nice...I'm missing her voice right now...James
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2003-07-13 09:54 PM


listen lovely one
to the voice inside of you
where no shadows lurk

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sven
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11 posted 2003-07-14 01:11 AM


very well done. . . I've liked these. . . you should put them together. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.


[This message has been edited by Sven (07-15-2003 09:53 AM).]

gemjop
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12 posted 2003-07-14 09:28 AM


Oh you do it everytime, take the words i cannot say or write, and write them. This is so how I feel at the moment. So thanks for using your wonderful mind to make me feel less alone in the silence.

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