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Logan
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0 posted 2003-07-11 10:38 PM



Is where we are, a dream, or reality
Which is the real, I wish to see
How can I find, where to be free
Where am I, the very real me

Why should I ponder on where I be
For I can go, over the land or the sea
In my comfort is where I will dwell
Lost in the whispers the wind does tell

Will I wake up and find all is gone
Where I found peace and where I belong
Not as long as my mind can reach
To ponder the mysteries and what they teach

So where is it, what is real
Or is it a dream my heart does feel
Did I find, or did I lose
Only I have the right to choose

Let me be where the wind blows free
Whether dream or reality
For all the same, if I belong
Hearing the sound of the nightwind song


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Snowflake From Hell
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1 posted 2003-07-11 10:44 PM


Let me be where the wind blows free
Whether dream or reality
For all the same, if I belong
Hearing the sound of the nightwind song


Gotta love that verse.

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-07-11 10:47 PM


Whether sprites or weather light
Or if the wind does sing a song
In the wind all through the night
Is where the you of you belong

~*~

Never leave the fires too long...
build them that all might follow the spark

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-12-2003 07:30 AM).]

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-07-11 10:47 PM


"Let me be where the wind blows free
Whether dream or reality
For all the same, if I belong
Hearing the sound of the nightwind song"


And...you are still near dear keeper.
I could sense your presence Logan. *soft smile*
A most beautiful write...come sit by the fire and tell us more.
~Very soft smiles & gentle hugs, Leighgirl~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Martie
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4 posted 2003-07-11 11:30 PM


Logan...some pondering questions, and as always, a possitive look.  I feel like you always know where you are, but where going, only tomorrow will tell.  
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5 posted 2003-07-12 12:25 PM


wonderful poetry...wonderful you, Sweet Man. Missing you. Sorry I haven't been around.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-07-12 12:31 PM


A flight on the wing of what if, is truly a noble and favorite exploration.
Nice write. ThisDiamond

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2003-07-12 12:39 PM


smiles?

YES.

You are a lovely tune Logan.

missed you Lo.

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-07-12 12:42 PM


Logan - you do know where you are, in dream or reality...

BC

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with you
9 posted 2003-07-12 12:07 PM


"In my comfort is where I will dwell
Lost in the whispers the wind does tell"

I love this part, it says so much to me

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-07-12 12:27 PM


a beautiful calming write
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11 posted 2003-07-12 09:28 PM


Logan, I am so happy to see you again. This is nothing less than I would expect from you..wonderful.
Sandra

vlraynes
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12 posted 2003-07-12 09:36 PM



So lovely, Logan.
Wonderful to see you around here again.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

MsSouthernOrchid
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13 posted 2003-07-12 09:43 PM


This poem is perfect. You are very talented.
garysgirl
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14 posted 2003-07-12 09:48 PM


Let me be where the wind blows free
Whether dream or reality
For all the same, if I belong
Hearing the sound of the nightwind song


Just how I feel, Logan. Very good
writing.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Honeybee
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15 posted 2003-07-12 09:59 PM


"Let me be where the wind blows free
Whether dream or reality
For all the same, if I belong
Hearing the sound of the nightwind song."
___________________________________________

It's good to see you posting again.  This is perfect and beautiful in every way.

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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16 posted 2003-07-12 10:02 PM


what a great post

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

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