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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-07-11 04:48 AM


Tangled souls
Embraced as one
Forming
The flow from
Which life began

Travelling,
Far and wide
To places
Many hide

Dreams, thoughts,
Calling within
Drawing souls
To there
Entrapment

Till the death
Of decaying shells
The souls remain
In prison cells

Trapped,
Flowing inside
Surrounding hearts
With flames of life

Bringing love
That keeps them alive
Without it
They would surely die

Knowing many hide
There feelings inside
They push
To the surfaces
The feelings they hide

Hoping that
One day
Love will travel
Deep inside
So they can feed
And stay alive


Till there days of freedom
They serve the shell
They do call humans

Who’s minds
Need souls
To live
And souls need
Love within…

© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-07-11 11:11 AM


everyone needs love and be loved...but, due to how we were raisded, education or lack thereof, religious beliefs and beliefs in general, or lack thereof...we are all on different plains...different people, different ideas...what each person holds close and dear to heart another might not...but the important thing to remember is, we are all connected...and when one hurts another, without thinking of anyone but themselves...well, they don't realize the damage they may do to a person for life...walking away with no conscious...or guilt for their actions...using and hurting others, looking only to gain...thinking what can you do for me?  That concept I cannot or will not ever be able to tolerate.  So...it is best to try to do better always concerned about the hearts of others, realizing that no two people think alike....good insight and message sent here.  Thank you
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-11 11:21 AM


You are a vessel of love and may you always be filled to the brim with its magic!


EA

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