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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-10 02:05 PM



Purple
in pause

mind
skips
a tremor

eyelash
banter
in thoughts

in sleepy
fresh
morn

I slept thru
no nightmare
dismissal

you
were nowhere
to be dreamt.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-07-10 02:26 PM




good mornin, tweety!

Wind
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2 posted 2003-07-10 03:02 PM


Well that's a change You can't make me shiver if you had a GOOD day. You're still good: even when you're happy

At sunset I've won or lost.
At sunrise, I'm out again
-Ray Bradbury

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-07-10 03:06 PM


Adore this..i used the l word originally..bloody hell lol

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4 posted 2003-07-10 03:11 PM


I can tell your future Gem:

an idiot will invade your poems. Oh, and there he is

At sunset I've won or lost.
At sunrise, I'm out again
-Ray Bradbury

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-07-10 03:19 PM


Ahh gem . . . a good morning
may there be many more . . .
you dont deserve to be troubled

This was nice - I need to read this
thank you
xxoo

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6 posted 2003-07-11 02:24 AM


Hi Gemma  
It's night time...well, really 1:20 A.M. here in my part of Florida.....but, I couldn't sleep tonight, so I decided to read. I'm sure glad that I did. If not, I would have missed this delightful  GOODmorning  poem of yours. I'm surely glad that you had a good night's sleep.  
Heart hugs, my little friend  
Ethel Mae

Goodnight and sweet dreams. I'm going to bed, now...... ssssssshhhhhhhhh......



passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-07-11 02:27 AM


like it!
HopeS
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8 posted 2003-07-11 02:32 AM


hey gem  , its afternoon here while I am reading this , am I guess its evening fopr you now but 'yes this was a gem of a poem  !!

Hope

all my family are in England , so I am used to the time differences

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-07-11 08:02 AM


I slept thru
no nightmare
dismissal

you
were nowhere
to be dreamt.

this feels sad; even when they are gone, i enjoy the dream
i love the purple etching at the beginning

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