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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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Belgium

0 posted 2003-07-11 05:59 PM


Within our love a rose resides
It breaths the air our hearts confide
This rose, the back of true concern
makes my soul for your one yearn


                           Clumsy
                           first
                           kiss
                           grew
                           to
                           more,
                           feels
                           matured
                           in
                           times
                           decor,
                           Struggles and anguish
                           made thorny scenes
                           leading to
                           tranquil
                           peace,
                           serene
                           beauty
                         recovered
                        once again,
                      lovers embrace
                 equal lifes best cocaine,
                   hand in hand walking
                     along the highway
                      of love, facing
                       hidden future
                 together
                    *

[im not that good with html and such alike, so lets hope this figure is somewhat ok, it's supposed to be a rose :p]


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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-07-11 06:51 PM


It may not have graphically come across as a rose, but poetically it certainly did!

Warm hugs,
EA

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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-07-13 02:21 PM


Beautiful write
JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
3 posted 2003-07-16 04:57 AM


sweet on me..thanks.
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2003-07-16 09:06 AM


a rose indeed. keep up the good work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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