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Our Love. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Mist unfurls across the land and rises upwards, like a sleeper rising from a dream. My love for you is as strong as the hardest rock,you are my whole reason for being my sweetest. You are constantly on my mind,your sweet angel face is all that i see,you are my life the air that i breath. My heart has a love unmatched, a rich vermilion velvet hue of love that is the very deepest. Nights now no longer blue, your love and feelings warm me, hold me completely,whipser to me in midnights sweet bliss. Falling deep into the desiring dark depths of your eyes,i want to stay forever within your embrace,touch your face, place my hand on your heart, feel it race. Cruely crush my lips to yours in hot passionate kiss. Wake with me and let me hear your first rising sigh, as i kiss you goodmorning. Before you have woken from your dreams i will make love to you between your worlds of dream and reality. Let us stay forever in this embrace so perfect,so loving, so fervant. Holding you close to me makes my whole world, i give all of my love, to only thee freely. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Phil: this is indeed a dream: Let us stay forever in this embrace so perfect,so loving, so fervant. Holding you close to me makes my whole world, i give all of my love, to only thee freely beautiful and where is the fair maiden? xxoo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You are constantly on my mind,your sweet angel face is all that i see,you are my life the air that i breath. My heart has a love unmatched, a rich vermilion velvet hue of love that is the very deepest. Nights now no longer blue, your love and feelings warm me, hold me completely,whipser to me in midnights sweet bliss. Phil, this is so beautiful. I'm also going to ask, if I may.....where is your maiden? We don't want ya'll to leave, you know.  Hugs  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-09-2003 01:39 PM).] |
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freespirit Junior Member
since 2003-07-03
Posts 24USA |
"Before you have woken from your dreams i will make love to you between your worlds of dream and reality." How wonderfully romantic, please the two of you continue on with your words of love... "FREEDOM" Sir William Wallace (1270-1305, Scottish Patriot) Famous last word before he was hanged. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I rate this a 5-S on my romantic writing scale out of a possible 5!!!!! Sigh Sigh Sigh Sigh Sigh  EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
wonderful! TD |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
My prince, my knight, my king, your maiden, your Lady love resides inside your heart, I see thy reflection inside thy transparent heart, Freely I love thee, my love, with all the strength, with all thy being, with every beat of thy heart, it beats only for you my romantic king....all my love, thy Vermilion Queen xxxxlove..Your Romantic Heart I hope you like your photo my love~I know I do!  [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-10-2003 02:46 AM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Truly romantic Sandra |
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