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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-07-08 08:18 AM


It still lives
I felt it yesterday
it dawned
with a vision of her
and an embrace
even if only in dream

I swear
in life or dream
I've never felt
as pure or whole
as I in her arms
even if only in dream

I awoke
to this world again
the same dull ache
of another day
but today love still lives
even if only in dream

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-08-2003 08:19 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-07-08 08:21 AM


Aenimal
Dreams and love are eternal enjoyed.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-07-08 09:05 AM


Reminds me of a line from an old song...
"If you are but a dream, I hope I never waken"
Very very nicely written and much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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3 posted 2003-07-08 09:18 AM


that was sweet and romantic. you know what I say about love

have I done magenta yet?

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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4 posted 2003-07-08 09:23 AM


Excellent!
Eric

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with you
5 posted 2003-07-08 09:31 AM


"I awoke
to this world again
the same dull ache
of another day
but today love still lives
even if only in dream"

I know exactly how this feels be glad you got to hold her in your dreams, I've heard it said that when we dream like that, our souls are touching.....

Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-07-08 09:47 AM


Thanks Sy

Thank you Nancy wish i was still sleeping too grin

No Liz I think it's a new color grin

Thanks Ericc

Thanks SEA it was something else, rarely if ever dreamt anything as vivid

Ceinwyn
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7 posted 2003-07-08 11:44 AM


for real

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

gemjop
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8 posted 2003-07-08 11:56 AM


ya made me lose my stomach with this one. like a punch in the guts. stunning king Ralph.
Honeybee
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9 posted 2003-07-08 12:04 PM


This is beautiful, though achingly so with that typical Raph sting.

I'm saving this...I know that you know I relate. *sighs we always torture ourselves huh?

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-07-08 01:06 PM



May your dreams forever be as sweet as this...

Warm hugs,
EA


littlewing
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11 posted 2003-07-08 01:53 PM


This is beautiful Raph . . .
may she visit you often
and may you sleep sweet peace
*smile*
Makes me happy to know you had a
nice dream
for once sweety
even if we must awake to reality
it will change, I know you disagree
but it will . . .
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-08-2003 01:57 PM).]

Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-07-08 02:10 PM


Thanks kris

Thanks GemDrop M'

Melissa torture can be good..whips, oils handcuffs..oh you mean thatttttt torture..ah nevermind

Linda rather not dream if i have to wake up from them

Thanks Sue


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13 posted 2003-07-08 02:41 PM


today love still lives

yes

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