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vandana
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0 posted 2003-07-07 06:22 PM



Do I ever have to say the words
About the end
Do I ever have to say the things
Of what we have been through
There Is no end
For love
Love goes on
Till we live
Love stays as long as we give
We can't go on like this
When we say goodbye
Just reailze and remember
those times we used to say about
love
There Is no end for love
Love goes on this moment
We are having right now
The days are short and nights are long
Want to hold you tight
Never let you go
Because there Is no end
For love

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-07-07 06:23 PM


There Is no end
For love

~*~

It's just over there,
in the shadows and mist...

Well done, Vandana...

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-07-07 06:29 PM


I believe that with my whole heart, unless one strays, or deceives, that to me is the end...b/c to continue would be self persecution and more pain...life is to short...we can go forward with great rewards, knowledge, wisdom, faith, courage and the strength to know we wish to change things.  But you are correct...most assuridly, b/c no matter what...that love I felt for him, has most indeed, complimented...and will never change, we just grew apart...a long time ago.  We didn't mean for it to happen...but it did.  But true love doesn't leave, it stays and endures...no matter what...it is kind, caring, understanding, patient, and wishes to give more then receive.  Thank you for sharing an awesome poem.  
littlewing
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3 posted 2003-07-07 08:14 PM


Vandana:

ok this one made me teary only because
I know . . . I will always love him no matter what . . .and what Lee has said above , MY God . . .
xxoo

suthern
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4 posted 2003-07-08 03:40 PM


The days are short and nights are long
Want to hold you tight
Never let you go
Because there Is no end
For love

No... there isn't. *S* And you've written that fact wisely and beautifully. *S*

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-07-08 04:03 PM


"Love stays as long as we give."
Yes, I believe love grows in layers of caring...james

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6 posted 2003-07-08 05:40 PM


Vandana, I hope love never ends for you.
passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-07-09 05:03 AM


another awesome write from you vandana, I can relate well
Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2003-07-09 05:08 AM


nicely written thoughts... very much enjoyed

regards
sudhir

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2003-07-09 07:10 AM


Beautiful inspiration within this, Vandana ... very nicely captured!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Ericc
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10 posted 2003-07-09 07:54 AM


Yes....there is no end.
Beautiful.
Eric

Jason Lyle
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11 posted 2003-07-09 08:59 AM


This is the end, my only friend...the end.
gotta love Jim Morrison, gotta love this write.

Jason

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-07-09 09:59 AM


There Is no end for love
Love goes on this moment
We are having right now
The days are short and nights are long
Want to hold you tight
Never let you go
Because there Is no end
For love


So true, my friend.....
I enjoyed this very much.
Hugs  
Ethel

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