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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-07-07 04:52 PM


Hers and Mine

We were
wanton lovers
once upon
a time.

Now freedom
is hers
and yearning
is mine.

JamesLee
July07
2003

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-07-07 05:26 PM


Oooh this just aches!!
Very well said James!
~Smiles and Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

quatro
Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392
Galveston, Texas
2 posted 2003-07-07 06:06 PM


Oh, I know this!  Beautifully written.

quatro

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-07-07 06:09 PM


yes that's how it goes unfortunately.....
short, sweet and made its point, i liked

J. K. Mitchell
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since 2002-01-12
Posts 311
GA
4 posted 2003-07-07 06:15 PM


Woah...Been there, done that.  You've reached inside my mind.

"Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin

[This message has been edited by J. K. Mitchell (07-07-2003 06:16 PM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-07-07 06:24 PM


felt that as well, it was a very long journey...but well worth it...in the end.  Keep the faith, miracles do happen...my best wishes sent your way, it's not a nice feeling.  
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2003-07-07 08:17 PM


Nice James,
love this style of yours as of late
the content I wish I could change
but the style is lovely
xxoo

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2003-07-08 01:22 AM


This was cute, reminds me of those towels, his and hers....

Thanks A Romantic Heart

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2003-07-08 05:46 AM


Thank you Enchantress, quatro, inked, J.K., LeeJ, littlewing and Romantic Heart for the nice responses...James
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