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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-06-13 04:18 PM

I prayed for help
I prayed for love
I prayed to be made well
I prayed for everything
That I needed help with

I kept on praying
But no quick answer came
But no matter
I knew one day it would
Come my way

So one day as I was driving
Out of no where came a stupid
Drunk driver
He side swiped my car
And it ended up in a river

I tried to get out
But the water kept me trapped
I prayed to God aloud
And prayed that I may live

My car is now full of water
I am starting to drown
I see a bright light
And angels all around

One sticks out her had
And says "Come with me."
I grabbed her hand
And then I knew I must
Be dead

But now I am in heaven
I am an angel just like her
I watch out for people
And help them when they
Are hurt

What I feel bad about now
Are how many people who are killed
By drunk drivers
I know their pain as they die
Because I was once in their shoes

Cold hands means a warm heart

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-13 04:36 PM

a very good write expressing experience,,,

QjQ

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-06-13 05:40 PM

loner - a very good write and a keen reminder to not drink and drive. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

3 posted 2003-06-13 06:27 PM

How true... never drink and drive. Root beer is a different thing though. LOL! I'll never drive drunk because I don't drink alcohol - definitely a smart way to go.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-01 01:58 PM

What I feel bad about now
Are how many people who are killed
By drunk drivers
I know their pain as they die
Because I was once in their shoes......

Thats some Deep Stuff

ARCTIC WIND

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