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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-07-05 09:54 PM





Katydids, crickets
Night sounds load resonant noise
Summer blows on in

Mourning doves cooing
Black-bottomed sounds in the wind
Trees swing tympani


© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-07-05 09:59 PM


Just came in from between the cornfields     yep, love the sounds of summer!
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2 posted 2003-07-05 09:59 PM


you know i love these, karilea! beautiful!
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3 posted 2003-07-05 10:00 PM


Karilea, this is so beautiful.  I can hear those trees swaying...wow, how beautiful.  Smiling tonight at you!

You took me right out of a little depression pity party I was having.  Yah for you, my friend!

Patricia  

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4 posted 2003-07-05 10:00 PM


wow "k"  two great ones,,  i really enjoyed...

A voice of honesty
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more than voices
   of flattery
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5 posted 2003-07-05 10:05 PM


Karilea, you have captured the sounds and feel of summer so beautifully with these haiku's.

Except for the stiffling humidity, I just love everything about this season.

Huggles, Marti

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6 posted 2003-07-05 10:32 PM


Hi pretty lady!
I just got in from the beach..
and listening to the sounds..of summer.
*Listen to the warm*
~Hugs You!~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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7 posted 2003-07-05 10:59 PM


Lovely Karilea. The sounds, sights, scents of summer make me giddy. hee hee. hugs to you for this. Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

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8 posted 2003-07-05 11:00 PM


Beautiful Karilea! I enjoy hearing these sounds.
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