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brian sites
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0 posted 2003-07-05 12:58 PM



today I learned
that the 4th of July
is about
    
      cotton

as I floated in a pool of it
my head was filled with it
   as was the sky

and tomorrow morning

my mouth will be
too

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ecrivan
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1 posted 2003-07-05 01:11 AM


Happy 4th of July, Brian and all you wonderful American poets!!

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-05-2003 01:12 AM).]

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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2 posted 2003-07-05 01:34 AM


and tomorrow morning

my mouth will be
too


grins and the spinning room?

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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3 posted 2003-07-05 01:41 AM


holidays can do that,,,,  

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-07-05 02:15 AM



serenity blaze
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5 posted 2003-07-05 03:18 AM


sigh.

Tequila does that.

Oh YOU..........grinning here.

I'll put this one next to the "beer" poem in my library.


Janette
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6 posted 2003-07-05 10:39 AM


Hahahahhaah ... good one!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-07-06 10:43 AM



...is it all better yet?

Martie
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8 posted 2003-07-06 12:07 PM


brian...cotton isn't always soft.  
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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9 posted 2003-07-06 10:28 PM


ahahaha cotton - mouth?  *ehehe*

need a hershey bar or mann like five bottles of gatorade . . . peanut butter ice cream and chocolate covered oreos then lasagna . . .

I am crazy
loved this Bri
xxoo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2003-07-06 10:32 PM


Oh such a cute write!
Glad I didn't miss this one!
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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