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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-07-03 05:01 PM



We own these private
gestures -

Those words...spoken in the
silence of a touch.

The eyes that tell of more
through the slowness of
their glance.

Our breath...joined in giving
voice to a rhythm greater
than our own.

This is our language.

No one else...needs
to hear.

It is spoken...only in
our world.



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-07-03 05:15 PM



Such a silent gesture...
only the breeze was felt...

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2 posted 2003-07-03 05:21 PM


Soft as a summer's breeze...love this Eric!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Patricia
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3 posted 2003-07-03 05:50 PM


This is just beautiful, Eric.  Excuse me.  I think I have to go back for another read.

Wonderful!

Patricia

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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-07-03 07:30 PM


Really good Ericc! I am keeping this one! Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

AnamCara
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5 posted 2003-07-03 10:26 PM


no one knows
this calling from afar
mysteriously...drawing together
the two
as
One

seeing One is seeing the two

~~~
Love,
Angela

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6 posted 2003-07-03 10:29 PM


This is our language.

No one else...needs
to hear.

It is spoken...only in
our world.


Just beautiful, Eric.  

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-07-03 10:29 PM


Beautiful write
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8 posted 2003-07-03 10:43 PM


yummy!
A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 2003-07-04 01:35 AM


By your poem, there is nothing private about your heart, it flows with feeling!

Great write! enjoyed!

ambrish
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10 posted 2003-07-04 01:43 AM


its too good but its not only ur language but
universal language of love

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11 posted 2003-07-04 02:04 AM


I always love to read your heart
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12 posted 2003-07-04 02:26 AM


Nice....spoken as one who truly knows....

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Margherita
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13 posted 2003-07-04 05:10 AM


Magical .... gestures to dream of.
Love, Margherita

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14 posted 2003-07-04 09:09 AM


It cannot get any better.
Sandra

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15 posted 2003-07-04 09:10 AM


And what a beautiful world we share, as One, within our own private gestures.

Love is the most perfect language, and you speak it fluently and so eloquently; your words are the most exquisite string of priceless jewels.

Thank you for sharing your perfectly beautiful poem... for sharing your divine whisper.

I love you,
Moca

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16 posted 2003-07-04 11:36 AM


Lovers lost in a world all their own...

Love & Eternal Light,
EA

Martie
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17 posted 2003-07-04 01:05 PM


Ericc....You write love the way it should be, beautiful!
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highways, & byways, for now
18 posted 2003-07-04 01:50 PM


Ericc - spoken only in our world, I like that and it's so true...

BC

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