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the logic problem
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the logic problem |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Scratching X's in the box-- eliminate just what is not decide by proof just what is true and mark it with the fine proud dot. Step-by-step-- don't leap ahead forget the things you think you see or even what you hope will be dreams do not play logically... The obvious will fall away if this is so? Then that must stay. and if it won't you must erase-- the truth is somewhere in between. The dots and X's beg for ink. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa! too much thinking for me right now.... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Step-by-step-- don't leap ahead forget the things you think you see or even what you hope will be dreams do not play logically..." Was just playing with a similar thought myself. Like the way ya wrapped it up K.  |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Enjoyed this very much. Logical, honest, hopeful. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. This is my brain OFF drugs. sheesh. See? tsk...  Thanks for hopping through the hoops with me. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I love your brain off drugs...  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you've said it well all in black and white... without the filler, good words |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know this works for me  I understood every word, and appreciated the honesty, and also the hope I saw in this one. You never dissapoint me when I see your name I know it is time well spent. Miss you too. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The dots and X's beg for ink. ~*~  Yes, they do. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Step-by-step-- don't leap ahead forget the things you think you see or even what you hope will be dreams do not play logically Hey girl  I really like this.  Hugs to you, my friend  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-03-2003 10:39 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling at your brain off drugs... I love this...and love YOU!  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now I have to do this twice a year to stay in the Canadian Menza Society, and to register internationally so I know all about the blanks between those dots and boxes LOL, and you know what - you should try to do the test and get it, I bet you qualify m'friend. It is a fun thing to keep your senses sharp, try to find a test somewhere to try in the U.S. (this is an International Society.) Still missing ya. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
methinks you have much logic lodged between the x's and dots... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
intelegent and thought provoking...yeah..my brain seems to be broken right now Don't it allways seem to go, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Loved it! |
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