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Open Poetry #27

look away

TasteOfOctober
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

0 posted 2003-07-02 12:49 PM

Look Away

Look away from me and
maybe you'll see that
I still love you, btu I'm dead
And there are no real second chances.
Your'e gone and I bless you
As long as you stay away because
I'm not who I was any longer.
Take pity and leave, there is no truth to decieve, but you've never been a liar.
Look away...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-07-02 12:56 PM

damn....I know how this is

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2003-07-02 02:54 AM

I liked your poem it was very real and painful.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-07-02 03:38 AM

feelings well expressed,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-07-03 06:28 PM

does she know, b/c maybe if she did, her love for you would walk you both through this...love can work miracles...believe me.
And there is nothing more then a woman enjoys doing then nurturing and taking care of her man when he needs her...woman love honesty...even if it hurts...and together, perhaps you may find answers. I'll get off my soap box now...this was a very deep write. Many smiles and hugs sent your way.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-07-03 07:22 PM

interesting & heartfelt write. Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

6 posted 2003-07-03 09:47 PM

look away
stay away
look away
your words say it all so simply, and I can feel them.
Thank you.

TasteOfOctober
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

7 posted 2003-07-03 10:56 PM

thank you.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

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