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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-01 05:40 PM

When life becomes
too much to take
I perform the pinkie break

When pain becomes
an endless lake
I perform the pinkie break

The pinkie break
distracts my eyes
from real pain
and endless lies

Its truth and pain
That I forsake
When I perform

The pinkie break
*
*
*
*disclaimer* I have never broke my own pinkie to distract myself from pain, nor do I advise it

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-01-2003 05:42 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-07-01 05:44 PM

nice write,,,

enjoyed it...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2003-07-01 05:52 PM

I dunno, seems like an extreme way to distract yourself. But it's got a good structure and flow. Just left me with a moderate heebie-jeebie.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-07-01 06:10 PM

Whewww, there for a sec. you had me
worried... nice write..

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-07-01 06:12 PM

try giving birth........lol

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-01 06:22 PM

agreeing with inked

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

6 posted 2003-07-01 06:27 PM

Now we can take this pinkie break in another direction. Sit back with a delicate tea cup.
Lift thy hand and little finger in a delicate fashion and sip your cup of tea. Ah!
A pinky break. LOL
Good one.
Bonnie j aka Bon-Bon

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

7 posted 2003-07-01 06:35 PM

I never ever want to feel anything like birth, watched my wife do it twice.I never wanna feel that...I'd rather break my pinkie.

Jason

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

8 posted 2003-07-02 12:40 PM

"sighs" the things I post...

Jason

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2003-07-02 07:15 PM

Sometimes we need variety and you offer it with this poem!

cute!

A Romantic Heart

Cruina
Junior Member

since 2003-07-01

Posts 16
Virginia

10 posted 2003-07-02 07:17 PM

i really liked the repetition, it was very effective... though i was dissapointed to hear you had no personal experience with the pinky break...

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