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Canon_D_111
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since 2003-06-04
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New York USA

0 posted 2003-07-01 04:10 PM



Springs New Day

The sun falls gallant,
above cloud tops;
to sift new dawn skies.
Conjured prisms of rainbows
as rains of diamond dust;
fall magically over spring mists:

Spires rise, to cascade
fathoms of indigo;
horizons promise of day, aura;
bathe with enlightened rays
the passion of our love
in daybreaks fire:

We entwine as
mist;
embrace and rise
in rainbows
array;
to fall gallant above cloud tops
toward new dawn skies
embodied of golden aura
we cascade the
promise of day
and bathe in passionate love
as the sun rains magically over
Springs New Day.
WPWPOET 031402c.


© Copyright 2003 William Paul Wentzell wpwpoet - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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1 posted 2003-07-01 05:45 PM


Mmmm, love the images.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2003-07-01 08:03 PM


This is simply beautiful. It makes you believe in poetry again. I very much enjoyed it.
quatro
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since 2003-04-29
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Galveston, Texas
3 posted 2003-07-02 12:17 PM


Canon,

Nice job!  Thanks for sharing your vision.

quatro

ecrivan
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my own state
4 posted 2003-07-02 12:20 PM


radiant as is the day you describe, pleasure to read your verse


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-07-02 01:00 AM


gorgeous!
Canon_D_111
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since 2003-06-04
Posts 58
New York USA
6 posted 2003-07-02 09:13 AM


thank you all: It is wonderfull to have found a place to share...and to know poetry continues to be a part of life for so many...
peace love and understanding

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-07-02 03:45 PM


Enjoyed...James
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