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bbent
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0 posted 2003-07-01 05:37 AM


DTB…

I cut out my heart,that wasn’t enough,
Plunged my soul through a garbage disposal.
Still far from dead,trash compacted my head,
Hoping yet you’d accept my proposal.
You said that was cool,but you required more,
Then dumped me for a three headed weenie.
Awoke in a sweat,dropped the key by the desk,
Visions of you in a duct tape bikini.



Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

[This message has been edited by bbent (07-01-2003 05:50 AM).]

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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2003-07-01 05:46 AM


OUCH!!!  Must hurt like you know what to take off your bikini!!!!  Very interesting write, BB, and left me with some unique images, I must say!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Brad Majors
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Georgia
2 posted 2003-07-01 10:58 AM


lol this one was great
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2003-07-01 11:08 AM


wanna talk about it? probably not

I'll be moving downtown in a couple of weeks, but will keep my current email addy and may be online only every other day for now
hope all is ok Ray!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-01-2003 11:08 AM).]

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-07-01 01:32 PM


ouch
bbent
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5 posted 2003-07-01 06:59 PM


Thank's y'all...just stretching a bit trying to fire up a bored muse.appreciate you reading and replying as well as tolorating my bent sense of humor.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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