navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » whimper
Open Poetry #27
Post A Reply Post New Topic whimper Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-13 08:44 AM



Snuffly sniff
i cant catch a whiff
of anything close to my nose.

My tickling throat
gets right on my goat
and teases me down insomnias road.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
RedStoneEB
Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk
1 posted 2003-06-13 09:06 AM


hey i liked that poem short and simple and nice keep writing ill keep reading

RedStoneEB

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Cpat Hair
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-06-13 09:07 AM


need a tissue? perhaps a bit of menthol to ease the stuffiness? I think I saw some in the cabinet with the band-aids.

gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
3 posted 2003-06-13 09:12 AM


thanks Red,glad u liked. xx

ron, shall we just admit me to hospital this week and be done with it? lol. i think its for the best.thanks for reading friend.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-06-13 09:13 AM


gemjop
Nice, may I offer a sympathy cough drop.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-06-13 09:20 AM


well I sure hope it doesn't last...and that you feel better soon
*s
M

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-06-13 11:49 AM


Sending you some distant healing, gem dear!--and some magical potions--and angel tissues that are as soft as clouds!  

Spoonfuls of angel medicine,
Huggums,
EA

Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
7 posted 2003-06-13 12:10 PM


Hi, fellow-sufferer, you have my sympathy. Amusing little poem-at least you can still smile.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
8 posted 2003-06-13 02:05 PM


cute write, i know the feeling
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
9 posted 2003-06-13 02:09 PM


AAAWWWW, Gemma...  

I'm so sorry that you aren't feeling good.
Now, you gets lots of rest and drink plenty
of fluids. Okay now, Little Lady?

I hope you do get better real soon, Gemma.
Hugs to you        
Ethel Mae

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
10 posted 2003-06-14 09:58 PM


nice gemma . . .

hope your better and got some sleep

sorry you dont feel well
but this made me smile
xxoo

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
11 posted 2008-02-02 01:39 PM


Nicely put

ARCTIC WIND

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » whimper

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary