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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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0 posted 2003-07-01 03:26 AM


Umbilical cord struggling with life
shrinking pull drowning hope
undertow within a whirling cesspool
sucking air of depressed survival,
tighter and tighter noose,
black and blue mind abuses
darkness trying to swallow
light of hope almost surrendered.

Razor incision of desperate change
escaping sure brain death,
fanatical need to carry on positively
impossible odds of winning
treading water the strength of Hercules,
David fights the Sea of Goliath,
waves battering a rocky shoreline
rocks of the island of seclusion
battering ram of determination
the miracle of one’s own faith.

Crawling out of sheer power
the cliffs rise out of failures,
shattered remains, clinging tattered,
terrain of endless dreams
fantasy of tearful emotions
impossible trek robbing Father Time,
horizon of ever changing scenes
dancing in blossoming possibilities.

Serene land of one’s own destiny
nothing should stop the sensual desires
peaceful spirit of coexistence
within Nature’s harmony to stimulate,
universes opening up to fantastic thoughts
inner and outer spell of who you are
nonconformity of spontaneous creativity,
a person of their own making.

Ghosts of writing past
haunt our designed future,
aberrations of changing values
may cause social pressures
adjustment will focus reasoning
allowing other to see differently.
Words that lie in pristine power,
floral masterpiece of presentation
challenging all the nerves and senses,
ultimate climax of a writer’s dream.

Thought: Success lies in another’s mind, who sees your words in different imagery every time they come back to visit.

Thought: If a writer can take you on a roller coaster and leave you wondering inside out, maybe then the ride was worth it.

Thought: My success within the public eye, may end up with a glimmer of some recognition, but my determination to improve will never be extinguished, as long as I have a pen in my hand beating with  a heart that loves words.

Thought: My failures may haunt me into depression, but those that want to censor any art form, make me determined to fight like the demons they portray artists as, for liberal art has no set boundaries to conform in, the gift of imagination comes from the heavens of divine inspiration. (A conservative inspired to think independently, is a soul saved.)

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 06/30/03


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Sunnyone
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2 posted 2003-07-01 04:41 AM


You've just encapsulated everything I have ever thought about the act of writing, or is it the 'art' of writing?  Whatever it is, it is hard to put your finger on.....but you managed to do just that here!!  Excellent, and especially enjoyed the closing thoughts!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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