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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-06-30 01:04 PM



If My Tears Are In Vain

Feeling my heartbreak
Those twists in the gut
Maybe without knowing
The ties have been cut

Clinging to something
Thats no longer there
The tears begin flowing
With aches of despair

I break without sound
Silent in my yearning
Wherever you are now
Are deaf ears burning

Will he remain distant
Oblivious to my pain
All becomes worthless
If my tears are in vain

HopeĀ©2003

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-06-30 01:14 PM


I break without sound
Silent in my yearning
Wherever you are now
Are deaf ears burning

Will he remain distant
Oblivious to my pain
All becomes worthless
If my tears are in vain


Hope, I could feel your pain in this. I really hope that he sees this. I hope, too, that if he is treating you this way without really intending to, that he'll stop doing it.
Heart hugs to you, sweet Lady  
Ethel


HopeS
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2 posted 2003-06-30 01:26 PM


Thank you Ethel for you caring reply
I shall call upon inner strength to help me get by

Hope

timothysangel1973
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3 posted 2003-06-30 04:00 PM


Will he remain distant
Oblivious to my pain
All becomes worthless
If my tears are in vain

Wonderful write Hope!

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-06-30 11:33 PM


Thanks for your reply , its so much appreciated

Hope

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-07-01 01:58 PM


I feel that way too Hope
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-07-01 02:32 PM


Tender writing...james
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-07-01 02:36 PM


Your tears to his ears...

Lovin' hugs,
EA

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