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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-06-13 06:31 AM


Who Knows

Who knows which way
a relationship will go
until time is allowed
for a season to flow.
Some will satisfy and
some will be so so.
This is the process
in which friendships
will die or grow.

JamesLee
June12
2003

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rwood
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1 posted 2003-06-13 06:50 AM


Nicely done. The constancy of human nature. So glad you're here James.

Sincerely,
Reg

RedStoneEB
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2 posted 2003-06-13 09:09 AM


enjoyed.......RedStoneEB

only joking i wasn't going to just put that i liked the whole poem really great how its wrote keep writing ill keep reading

RedStoneEB

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-13-2003 09:09 AM).]

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-06-13 09:13 AM



All relationships, ideally in my mind, should be fixed as if they can remain platonic, even after a breakup.  Not always possible, but you know me, James, ever the optimist.


Patricia
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4 posted 2003-06-13 09:54 AM


Well, James a season just blew through my life.  Another to start soon, I guess.

You just keep getting better and better.

Patricia

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5 posted 2003-06-13 10:01 AM


James ~

Exactly! Who knows! We just go with the flow and see where it takes us!

Have a great day!
EA

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-13 02:14 PM


wise words
RMW
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7 posted 2003-06-13 02:38 PM


James....I smiled to read Patricia's comment. Wisely spoken. Bob
garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-06-13 02:44 PM


James, this is the truth. I do wish we
could all remain friends, though. :heart;
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-06-13 02:50 PM


Very wise write...and we just never know James.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Jennis#1
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10 posted 2003-07-10 07:40 PM


Wow. Wonderful poem. keep on posting.
anwaarhassan
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11 posted 2003-07-10 09:21 PM


Great poem...look forward to reading more of your work.

Anwaar

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